One thing that stands out to me is the kind of hard edge between elements in terms of their lighting and value. It kind of works for me as kind of a surreal scrapbook type situation, but on the other hand, it could also be cool to see if there is a way of unifying the elements more in this pictorial space.
Good concept and composition, but try some variations of graphic treatments to explore options for color and value.
One thing that stands out to me is the kind of hard edge between elements in terms of their lighting and value. It kind of works for me as kind of a surreal scrapbook type situation, but on the other hand, it could also be cool to see if there is a way of unifying the elements more in this pictorial space.